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Thursday, February 4, 2010

Falsifying Dreams





Don't built dreams of bricks,
It's just nature playing tricks.
When one brick tumbles,
All your effort fumble
Ruining your dreams to ashes,
When your pinion lashes
For the flight.
Your destiny crushes,
Increasing your pain,
Endeavouring all your might.
Then you neither see hope
Nor a guiding light.
It's just falsifying dream,
Slapping you tight.

                         ©  Zinnia Mitra

6 comments:

Pallav Gogoi said...

Wow...extremely profound thoughts. Loved it. Keep composing beautiful poems.

Blessings

Pallav

Mina Orgone said...

http://minaorgone.blogspot.com/2010/02/about-me.html

Thank you.

Krishna said...

Really a thought provoking poem of substance and quality...!

Zinnia said...

Thank you everybody...keep reading...

aayanman said...

Interesting use of words..poetic to pragmatic...liked the flow.

Zave said...

Loved the beautiful thoughts pouring in.