Thursday, February 4, 2010

Falsifying Dreams

Don't built dreams of bricks,
It's just nature playing tricks.
When one brick tumbles,
All your effort fumble
Ruining your dreams to ashes,
When your pinion lashes
For the flight.
Your destiny crushes,
Increasing your pain,
Endeavouring all your might.
Then you neither see hope
Nor a guiding light.
It's just falsifying dream,
Then slapping you tight.

                         ©  Zinnia Mitra


Pallav said...

Wow...extremely profound thoughts. Loved it. Keep composing beautiful poems.



Mina Orgone said...

Thank you.

Tarun Mitra said...

Nice one :)

Krishna said...

Really a thought provoking poem of substance and quality...!

xeennia said...

Thank you everybody...keep reading...

Gyanban said...

Interesting use of words..poetic to pragmatic...liked the flow.

Zave said...

Loved the beautiful thoughts pouring in.